Thread:CameronPG/@comment-4457974-20151001000237

Hi, CameronPG!

First, I'd like to thank you for all your work on this wiki. Having another contributor is always very encouraging to me. But recently, I've noticed you've made some edits that have added information that isn't particularly relevant to JumpStart and is frankly a bit too obvious, making its inclusion unnecessary. Examples include listing how many days are in each month on the Bulletin Board page or listing every single possible math problem on the Ice Cave page.

The problem with these edits is that they add information that doesn't really tell readers anything about the subject matter of the article, or anything that they don't already know or can figure out. It also isn't particularly relevant to JumpStart in particular. There's no actual reason to include it other than to make the page look longer, but it doesn't actually add anything to the page.

This isn't meant to be discouraging, but rather to encourage you to make the most helpful edits possible. Try adding information about the specifics of gameplay, different difficulty levels, or facts about the educational content that is less obvious and/or is communicated much more concisely. Screenshots are also very helpful. For examples of well-developed activity pages, take Frankie's Pizza Stand or Pattern Blaster.

Thanks for being a contributor to the JumpStart Wiki! 