Thread:TomiTomi68/@comment-4457974-20160729201646

I've had to remove a couple of the trivia facts you've added because they didn't really qualify as "Trivia". The trivia isn't just any random piece of information; it has to be an unimportant, but interesting little "fun fact" that wouldn't fit very well anywhere else in the article, and isn't too obvious. "The mission clue is in the right environment for two keys", for example, is just a basic fact of the game; this kind of information should be somewhere else more prominent in the article.

Or at least, it seems to be TRYING to convey basic information. There's an even bigger problem with this trivia, and it's an issue I've noticed in several of your edits, related to trivia and otherwise. You write things that don't make sense. For example, in the one I just mentioned, I simply and totally cannot understand the meaning of the word "for" in this context. Another example is in a sentence you added to the Mr. Brewster article that I had to remove because it was completely impossible to understand: "A question mark in on a letter for a pen pal when winning 100 points for a stamp." There is nothing about this sentence that makes any sense at all; even apart from the fact that there's no predicate to speak of and you never write "on" directly after "in" in English, I can't even tell what you're trying to say.

Not to be rude, but things like these make it seem like you have a limited grasp of the English language. And to be honest, it's really not good for the Wiki to have "information" that is impossible to understand. I know that you're trying to be helpful, and it's not a big deal to have some grammar mistakes here and there that others can correct later, but when it's THIS bad, readers and editors alike will just be confused. I'm not even sure HOW to correct some of these things because I don't know what you're meaning to write.

I've noticed you've made some edits that don't require much writing, such as adding links to articles. These changes are helpful and I thank you for them! Unless you can improve your English writing skills significantly, I need to politely ask you to focus on edits of this kind, those which are helpful but don't require much writing, such as adding categories and links. I'm not asking for perfection, certainly, but some of the things you write are incredibly confusing, and people go to wiki's to learn something new, not to be confused and frustrated because they can't understand what they're reading.

I really hope I wasn't too harsh, and that we can fix these issues and you can enjoy your time on the Wiki! 